Neptune
Sufjan Stevens Lyrics


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What's right and what's wrong?
Don't you hold me too lightly
To words as I've rounded them off
To the nearest of ten

For I gathered your body
In envious capture
In envious thought

Oh forgive me, oh gods
Or forgive me in fortune
Forgive me in feeling it out for myself
As I ought to have feelings for something
As great as thou art

Some great white rose
Of youth, your pleasure
Gives of my own heart
Generous portions, wisely
Breaks of my own heart
I felt the arm's length
While I've gone on my own way

Conserve me, strange waters
Come and obey me, strange waters
Have it your own way

So if you won't hold me
I have no objections
So if you won't please me
I make no commands




So if you don't trust me
It's best if I drown

Overall Meaning

The lyrics of "Neptune" by Sufjan Stevens, Nico Muhly, and Bryce Dessner explores themes of desire, guilt, and forgiveness while cleverly weaving together imagery of water and the stars. The opening lines seem to express confusion and uncertainty about what is right and wrong, suggesting that the singer may have done something wrong but is unsure of how to make amends. They are asking for forgiveness from the gods or perhaps just seeking it within themselves.


As the song progresses, the imagery of water becomes more prominent, especially when the singer pleads with "strange waters" to "come and obey" them. This suggests a desire for control or power over their own desires, which may have resulted in their guilt. The lines "so if you don't trust me, it's best if I drown" are haunting, and suggest that the singer feels that they are not worthy of trust or forgiveness.


The final lines of the song seem to suggest that the singer has come to terms with their guilt and is willing to accept the consequences. The use of the line "if you won't hold me, I have no objections" suggests that they are ready to let go and move on from both their guilt and desire.


Overall, "Neptune" is a complex and layered song that explores themes of guilt, desire, and forgiveness through the use of innovative and beautiful imagery.


Line by Line Meaning

What's right and what's wrong?
Questioning the concept of morality.


Don't you hold me too lightly
Requesting not to be treated with disregard or apathy.


To words as I've rounded them off
Acknowledging that words can often be imprecise or incomplete.


To the nearest of ten
Emphasizing the lack of exactness or precision in communication.


For I gathered your body
Admitting to having possessive or selfish feelings for someone.


In envious capture
Describing the negative emotions associated with possessiveness.


In envious thought
Further elaborating on the emotions of envy and jealousy.


Oh forgive me, oh gods
Asking for forgiveness from a higher power.


Or forgive me in fortune
Asking to be forgiven by fate or circumstance.


Forgive me in feeling it out for myself
Acknowledging the importance of personal experience and intuition.


As I ought to have feelings for something
Recognizing the necessity of emotional connection to things of importance.


As great as thou art
Referring to the greatness of the higher power or entity being addressed.


Some great white rose
Symbolizing purity and youthful beauty.


Of youth, your pleasure
Describing the pleasurable aspects of youthful beauty.


Gives of my own heart
Expressing the depth of emotional connection to the object of desire.


Generous portions, wisely
Acknowledging the importance of measured and controlled emotions.


Breaks of my own heart
Describing the emotional pain caused by desire.


I felt the arm's length
Feeling the distance or separation from the object of desire.


While I've gone on my own way
Continuing on a path of personal growth and discovery despite emotional obstacles.


Conserve me, strange waters
Asking for protection and guidance from unfamiliar or challenging circumstances.


Come and obey me, strange waters
Requesting that unfamiliar forces align with personal desires.


Have it your own way
Acknowledging a higher power or entity's autonomy and control over a situation.


So if you won't hold me
Acknowledging the potential rejection or lack of emotional connection from someone.


I have no objections
Accepting the situation without argument or resistance.


So if you won't please me
Recognizing the potential for loss or unmet desire.


I make no commands
Not expecting or demanding the fulfillment of personal desires.


So if you don't trust me
Acknowledging a lack of trust or faith in oneself or from others.


It's best if I drown
Preferring to succumb to difficult or overwhelming circumstances rather than fight against them.




Lyrics © MUSIC SALES CORPORATION, BMG Rights Management
Written by: BRYCE DAVID DESSNER, JAMES VAN MCALISTER, NICO MUHLY, SUFJAN STEVENS

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Most interesting comments from YouTube:

@Lt.852

Neptune (Lyrics)

What's right and what's wrong?
Don't you hold me too lightly
To words as I've rounded them off
To the nearest of ten
For I gathered your body
In envious capture
In envious thought
Oh forgive me, oh gods
Or forgive me in fortune
Forgive me in feeling it out for myself
As I ought to have feelings for something
As great as thou art

Some great white rose
Of youth, your pleasure
Gives of my own heart
Generous portions, wisely
Breaks of my own heart
I felt the arm's length
While I've gone on my own way

Conserve me, strange waters
Come and obey me, strange waters
Have it your own way
So if you won't hold me
I have no objections
So if you won't please me
I make no commands
So if you don't trust me
It's best if I drown



@gabrielledennis549

What's right and what's wrong?
Don't you hold me too lightly
To words as I've rounded them off
To the nearest of ten
For I gathered your body
In envious capture
In envious thought
Oh forgive me, oh gods
Or forgive me in fortune
Forgive me in feeling it out for myself
As I ought to have feelings for something
As great as thou art
Some great white rose
Of youth, your pleasure
Gives of my own heart
Generous portions, wisely
Breaks of my own heart
I felt the arm's length
While I've gone on my own way
Conserve me, strange waters
Come and obey me, strange waters
Have it your own way
So if you won't hold me
I have no objections
So if you won't please me
I make no commands
So if you don't trust me
It's best if I drown



All comments from YouTube:

@eddjoey

remember when Sufjan, Nico, Bryce and James invented the solar system? good times, indeed

@FleeebCrabinProductions

I’d give ANYTHING to be able to write and compose a song like this

@fsands69

You found this so you can. Influences are a real thing

@lankyalpaca

and to sing like this too

@vincentlawrencer

Right? That same thought has been in my head for a couple of years now all because of this song. There’s no predictability to it yet it hits so emotionally and powerfully.

@ATACTA

indeed

@Matt-np5cp

unreal vocals. damn, suf.

@Lt.852

Neptune (Lyrics)

What's right and what's wrong?
Don't you hold me too lightly
To words as I've rounded them off
To the nearest of ten
For I gathered your body
In envious capture
In envious thought
Oh forgive me, oh gods
Or forgive me in fortune
Forgive me in feeling it out for myself
As I ought to have feelings for something
As great as thou art

Some great white rose
Of youth, your pleasure
Gives of my own heart
Generous portions, wisely
Breaks of my own heart
I felt the arm's length
While I've gone on my own way

Conserve me, strange waters
Come and obey me, strange waters
Have it your own way
So if you won't hold me
I have no objections
So if you won't please me
I make no commands
So if you don't trust me
It's best if I drown

@SophieInSeattle

At the end of the song, starting at 2:40, I feel like it perfectly evokes the imagery of large swells of waves crashing over the listener; my favorite part of the piece.

@SubparPanda

This is my favorite song on the album, so beautiful

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