Haiku
Tally Hall Lyrics


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I have been trying
To write a haiku for you
Some things I just can't do

Maybe you're beyond
Ancient Asian poetry
Or maybe it's just me
I have been trying
To get this haiku just right
All night for you alright

I'm through!

Maybe this poem
Was lost in the sauce we spilled
That never got refilled

I've never thought much
Of formulaic verse anyway
And rhymes are not my fort–

I have been trying
To get this haiku just right
All night for you alright

I'm through!

I'm trying not to try too hard
But you're hard to write down right
So I pen these trite attempts
At haikus for you tonight

La da dee diddum
Lada da dum doo diddle
Dum doo la dee do

There that's sufficient
I wrote a haiku for you

Well I tried at least
And that's not so bad
I'm working here
Can that be said for you?

I'm trying not to try too hard
But you're hard to write down right
So I pen these trite attempts
At haikus for you tonight

Words don't work like Webster says
They trip me up all night




I'm just trying to write for you
But you're hard to write down right

Overall Meaning

The lyrics of Tally Hall's "Haiku" present the story of a person who is trying to write a haiku for someone they care about but is finding it challenging. The author explains how hard it is to write a haiku and how the poem might have been lost in the "sauce we spilled" that never got refilled. The lyrics also suggest that the person they're writing for might be beyond "ancient Asian poetry" or that maybe it's just the author who is not good at writing it. The author writes about their lack of confidence in writing poetry and how they're trying not to try too hard, but writing a haiku for this person is essential to them.


The lyrics of "Haiku" highlight the difficulty of writing poetry and how writing a haiku can be so challenging. The author explains how they tried all night to get the haiku right, but they were unable to do so. The lyrics are relatable and express the emotions one feels when they're trying to write something for someone they care about but can't seem to get it right. The use of "La da dee diddum lada da dum doo diddle dum doo la dee do" in the chorus is interesting as it breaks the pattern and introduces a playful, musical side to the poem.


Line by Line Meaning

I have been trying
I've been working hard to craft something special just for you


To write a haiku for you
I'm attempting to write a traditional form of Japanese poetry just for you


Some things I just can't do
Unfortunately, there are limits to my creativity and expression


Maybe you're beyond
Perhaps you're too advanced to appreciate this ancient art form


Ancient Asian poetry
I'm referring to the sophisticated, elegant poetry of Japan


Or maybe it's just me
It's possible that I'm the one who's not capable of writing a proper haiku


To get this haiku just right
I'm making every effort to perfect this haiku


All night for you alright
I've been doing this all night for you, just to please you


I'm through!
Finally, I've finished! I can move on from this task


Was lost in the sauce we spilled
My attempts at writing a haiku were sidetracked by a distraction, possibly drinking and spilling something


That never got refilled
We never bothered to replace the spilled liquid and continued on without it


Of formulaic verse anyway
I'm not a fan of writing poetry that follows strict rules or formulas


And rhymes are not my fort–
I'm not very good at crafting rhyming poetry


I'm trying not to try too hard
I don't want to overthink or force the writing process


But you're hard to write down right
Despite my efforts, it's difficult for me to capture your essence in words


So I pen these trite attempts
I'm writing these mediocre attempts at poetry for you


At haikus for you tonight
Specifically, I'm attempting to write several haikus just for you tonight


There that's sufficient
I've finally created a decent haiku for you


Well I tried at least
Even if my attempts at writing poetry weren't successful, I put forth effort


And that's not so bad
Trying and failing is better than not trying at all


I'm working here
I'm doing my best to create something special for you


Can that be said for you?
Do you put forth the same effort in our relationship?


Words don't work like Webster says
I'm struggling to find the right words to express how I feel


They trip me up all night
I keep stumbling and getting stuck in my attempts to write poetry


But you're hard to write down right
It's especially difficult to capture your essence in words, making poetry even more challenging




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