Counted on Sweetness
The Wrens Lyrics


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"i was born too soon" is how my grave will read
Lived to 35 but died at 17
It took an hour or so to reach the border as planned
A few miles from here i would never know
I'll confess what i've done in time
Lived through worse and never cared for anyone
They never seemed to mind for me
I left before they ever knew that i was gone
It's the facts blood knows laid out in front of you
Tied up in foolish news waiting for a view
All the time i've been waiting by them
Look at them they can't find me
In walked the left to lose / chained down to please a few
I wonder who they'll choose / i wonder who




In whispered to my ear, "what will you do until then"
Dream all you want me dear it's a fitting an end.

Overall Meaning

The Wrens's song "Counted on Sweetness" is a melancholic reflection on life, death and missed opportunities. The opening lines, "i was born too soon" is how my grave will read / Lived to 35 but died at 17" presents an unsettling paradox that sets the tone for the rest of the song. The singer seems to have lived his life in a hurry, cutting it short in the prime of his youth. The next line, "It took an hour or so to reach the border as planned / A few miles from here i would never know" implies that he may have taken his own life, planning his exit and avoiding detection.


The chorus, "It's the facts blood knows laid out in front of you / Tied up in foolish news waiting for a view / All the time i've been waiting by them / Look at them they can't find me" suggests that the singer had a complicated relationship with his family and/or the media. He feels boxed in by their expectations and wants to escape their scrutiny. However, he also seems to want to be recognized and appreciated for who he is. This duality is observed in the lines, "I'll confess what i've done in time / Lived through worse and never cared for anyone / They never seemed to mind for me / I left before they ever knew that i was gone". The singer wants to be remembered, but on his own terms.


The final verse is poignant in its simplicity. "In walked the left to lose / chained down to please a few / I wonder who they'll choose / i wonder who" hints at the singer's regret at not being able to do more with his life. The line "In whispered to my ear, 'what will you do until then' / Dream all you want me dear it's a fitting an end" is a haunting reminder that we are all mortal and that death is inevitable. The singer's life may have been cut short, but his dreams are still alive.


Line by Line Meaning

i was born too soon
My grave will read that I died young, before I could fully experience life


Lived to 35 but died at 17
I may have lived to 35, but my soul died at the age of 17


It took an hour or so to reach the border as planned
I had a plan to leave and it took me about an hour to execute it


A few miles from here i would never know
Once I leave this place, I'll never know what will happen to it or the people in it


I'll confess what i've done in time
I will eventually come clean about my wrongdoings


Lived through worse and never cared for anyone
I've endured difficult situations before, and have never been concerned with anyone else's well-being


They never seemed to mind for me
Nobody ever showed any genuine concern for me


I left before they ever knew that i was gone
I left without anyone noticing or caring that I was gone


It's the facts blood knows laid out in front of you
The truth is apparent and undeniable, as it is ingrained in our blood and DNA


Tied up in foolish news waiting for a view
I'm being held back by meaningless distractions and waiting for a new perspective


All the time i've been waiting by them
I've been waiting for a significant amount of time with no progress or change occurring


Look at them they can't find me
Despite being physically present, those around me are emotionally distant and oblivious to my struggles


In walked the left to lose / chained down to please a few
The people who are left behind are sacrificing their freedom to satisfy the desires of a select few


I wonder who they'll choose / i wonder who
I'm curious as to who will be chosen or left behind


In whispered to my ear, "what will you do until then"
Someone whispered to me, asking what I will do in the meantime


Dream all you want me dear it's a fitting an end.
You can dream all you want, but death is a logical and fitting end to life




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